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Deceit

The darkness stretching endlessly before him, he accelerated his speed to reach his goal - the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel beckoning him. The deep longing within turning into agony, his legs weakening, his eyes growing dim – the hope that he had nurtured for so long slowly ebbing. The blackness around him gradually thinning, he cried out with delirious anticipation – he was so close now to fulfilling his dream of claiming her. The sweet image of her bathing in sunshine, he bolted forward, ready to embrace her – when he could see her swaying in the arms of another. The shock of recognition disallowing any pain, everything he felt dissolved into despair – as he realized that he had followed the light into a void.

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Date: 1/3/2015 8:51:00 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Helga
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:57:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win Helga... huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:29:00 PM
HELGA, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:43:00 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
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Date: 12/14/2014 8:55:00 PM
Your poem was descriptive HM Schierloh, thanks for sharing it. It reads like a short story.
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Helga Schierloh
Date: 12/14/2014 8:59:00 PM
I really appreciate your nice comment, Lara!

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