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Decaying Gown

In decaying fall, They, deadened colours abound Leaves granted leave, gown .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/30/2014 10:21:00 AM
Love this haiku James, original and creative.
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James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Maurice, about my favourite Season, James :)
Date: 10/24/2014 4:03:00 PM
Beautifully summed, this haiku hits the proverbial nail on the head.
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James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 4:12:00 PM
Thank you kindly. Have a lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 10/24/2014 1:39:00 AM
your last line . :)!nice..
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James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 1:44:00 PM
Thank you Eloisa. I do enjoy entering the Haiku door every so often, James :)

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