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Death's Minions

I saw a dark mass A floating dying being Looking fierce, deadly Wanting to steal away souls Hope it’s not looking for me Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 9/27/2011 6:59:00 PM

Yes side step em mate ....straight left to the head knock em dead...bring out the plow... to bury fred.. put this in the memories verse just now yes love is sweet but incomplete, without my baby ...thou....to meet....somehow

Tim B

Date: 9/26/2011 12:43:00 PM

Eerie piece Russel, captures the fear of death quite nicely and personifies it in a most frightening manner, I am sure it's not looking for you just yet though old chap :) Great poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/26/2011 12:24:00 AM

an intense piece Russell and speaks volumes .. of inner depth luv.. those minions sound so ominous luv...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2011 12:06:00 AM

I sure like this one , Russell and thanks for your comment on my church poem. I sure worked hard on that one today!

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 9/25/2011 11:56:00 PM

Nice one Russell!!!!!!smiles....chiquita