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Today, November 2nd, is my brother's birth date. Remembering my only, and very special, brother.

His body still warm, our brother lay still, his face set in perfect repose, the echo of our voices lifted in hymn, fading like the rattle of death in those closing days before the last soft breath. I wanted to watch his spirit rise, reaching upward toward the prize his faith had earned. I had to be content with a tender touch and unspoken words of farewell, bathed in tears of longing to share his final journey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/30/2014 1:43:00 PM
wow, I just recently lost my brother, his birth date is Oct 2. very nice poem, thank you for sharing
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Date: 12/30/2014 4:20:00 PM
Thank you, Debra, for the visit, and for taking the time to comment. I love Poetry Soup!

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