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Deaths Epiphany

The man who raised me, his hair has become so very gray. The hands that once held me, their skin is now so paper-thin. I know, the time is coming close where he shouldn’t live alone. What can I say, that he doesn’t already know? He wants his independence, but I hear a waiver in that thought. So now I begin to worry and want to call him every night. I cried when my mother died, but with him I will cry so much more. As long as he’s alive… I still feel tethered in their love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/18/2012 3:53:00 AM
very intelligent. i admire this piece
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Touched" contest Carol. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:00:00 PM
congrats Carol on an outstanding win for this truly touching piece of poetic art luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:57:00 PM
I sure remember this one, and I'm glad to see it on a winners' list. Congratulations, Carol.
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Date: 2/23/2012 3:13:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, this is a touching poem, that's the sad part in live,I don't want to think about, but it will come. God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:40:00 AM
congrats Carol on a slendid win for this intense and deep write luv..
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "(Any) Poem Of the week" contest Carol E. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carol. This is very descriptive material.
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:28:00 PM
CAROL.. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your poem of the week... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/21/2012 7:10:00 PM
oh, CArol. THis is sad. You must be really close to him. For me, it was the opposite. I don't think I will feel much of anything when my dad dies. I never really knew him but my mom is everything to me!
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:47:00 AM
We all go through this from both sides and neither side is easy..in-law apartments seem the best if possible..pleased pick a free verse to enter in my new contest ;) Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2012 4:51:00 PM
Yes, that is true to a certain extent..Sorry to hear of the loss of your mother..That is a terrilbe loss in one's life..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 2/18/2012 11:16:00 AM
I could have written this poem, because so is my fathers and my life too at the moment.Very well written Carol. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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