Death Whispers In the Night

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circling overhead clouds gather where you lay there will be no bouts of sunshine here today the birds are gone the trees are bare branches stretch without a care their plea unheard the silence echoes is anyone out there no one really knows still i listen hoping to catch a glimpse to hear a sign to regain hope up i look in longing wait AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on October 14, 2021 for contest LET'S MIX IT UP sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 3RD

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Constance La France

Date: 11/4/2021 2:50:00 PM

Line, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Let's Mix It Up Contest, like the image ~ love and serenity _Constance

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2021 5:27:00 PM

Thanks for your inspiring contest, Constance ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/3/2021 8:02:00 PM

Dear Line, the resignation of your sadly beautiful couplet and the deep yearning felt in your poignant poem resonates with melancholic purity. Congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/4/2021 10:49:00 AM

Thank you very much, Susan. Most appreciated ~

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/30/2021 1:42:00 AM

What a powerful pull this poem has! Congrats on your win, Line! I’m adding this as a fave

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/30/2021 7:48:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely compliment, I also was quite happy with Constance's challenge and the result. Hugs xx