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Death Unknown

You were never suppose to leave you were to stay and watch the amazing things I could do you were to be there when all my dreams came through you were to enjoy every bit of happiness I felt That was what you were suppose to do But now it seems like what we"re suppose to do and what we do do are two unlike things Instead you just up and left without even saying bye Without even asking how I felt Without even waiting for my reply So now am stuck in the past Not knowing how or where I should move on to Can you at least help me try to find my way back? Because eventhough you left I still want you to experience the amazing things I am going to do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2016 8:06:00 PM
Marii ,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:39:00 PM
Marii, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/30/2010 1:05:00 PM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 4/30/2010 9:11:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marii. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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