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The death spiral of a Space-X rocket looking like a portal to an otherworld where I long to enter and belong like velvet on a royal gown, with silk ribbons in my braided hair flowing down the castle stair... and a knight, my own Sir Gallahad, vanquishing the dragons waiting to devour me.

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Date: 3/25/2024 5:26:00 PM
Death itself is an enigma and here the metaphors are exactly going with the vibes . Difficult for dark subject, yet your lines excel. Have a blessed day!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/25/2024 5:47:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to not only read my little verse, but also comment on it. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/24/2024 11:52:00 AM
An enchanting poem. I was fascinated by the combining the futuristic with the medieval references.
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Date: 3/24/2024 12:09:00 PM
Thank you. I think I actually spend too much time in an otherworld of fantasy, on second thought, maybe I don't spend enough time there!

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