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Death Preterition

They say I wait for you Didn’t they see me vying for another look at you as they shut the oak wood casket. They say I wait for you But know that they are lying. I don't save space on our bed for you Just that, that side is sagged under your weight They say I wait for you I’m crazy, are they implying? I don't launder clothes for you Just that a half-full load isn't environmentally great. They say I wait for you That truth I am denying. I don't set the dinner place for you Just love how your plate matches my plate. They say I wait for you Why do they come here, prying? To stare like I'm talking to the specter of you Don’t they know you dozed off just after you ate? Written on 05/10/2016 Re-entered for: Contest 'Denial' by Julia Ward

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Date: 5/21/2016 8:48:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/21/2016 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Sara,appreciate your taking the time for me!
Date: 5/10/2016 12:46:00 PM
Wow! Brilliantly atmospheric, suspenseful, ominous writing, Sara. I love the allusions, and the slightly creepy talking-to-oneself vibe that it creates. A definite FAV.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/10/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Michael for visiting!

Book: Shattered Sighs