Death Petal

The end is coming The death petal is revealed Its power is known Russell Sivey

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/1/2012 12:37:00 PM

gives the chill, dear russell... ominous yet beautifully quilled.. you are downright amazing!..:) wow and huggs!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/1/2012 10:44:00 AM

scary write, my friend

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/1/2012 8:21:00 AM

Scary and beautiful mixed together in three short lines...Very nice, Russell - Tim

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/30/2012 3:15:00 PM

When I read this poem, images of Colorado wildfire flashes in front of my eye...nicely written Senryu...enjoyed!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2012 3:07:00 PM

Interesting thoughts penned..Death comes to us all at some point in time..Thanks for stopping by..If this is for a contest, it should do very well..Your creativity is constantly being replenished..Sara