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Death of November

Like a child too long at the fair November is tired and needs to slumber Like an aging woman past her prime November is grey and sad with black cloaked skeletons of trees who once wore summer's splendor Like a homeless urchin November has no home, no purpose and wears tattered clothes of a lost Autumn Like the spent tears of a widow for a husband who did not come back from a long ago war November's battle is over, its weapons thrown down, its armies defeated Like the last dying wish on a soldier's lips it pulls at the skirts of an oncoming December, and begs to be laid in its final rest in the graveyard of a dying year....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 11:22:00 AM
Clearwater...
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Date: 12/4/2008 9:12:00 AM
Superb imagery... November is my birthday month so I get all the grim poems! ...seriously though, this is well conceived and expressed. It made me shiver, even here in Central Florida! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/28/2008 4:00:00 PM
You almost make we weep for this poor desolute month!! Sad old thing it is....Perhaps we need to give it another holiday, perhaps it needs a little shot in the arm!! Well done, personifcation!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:32:00 PM
Valerie - The month of ever shorting days - Wonderful use of this form - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/28/2008 3:32:00 PM
Valerie - The month of ever shorting days - Wonderful use of this form - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/28/2008 1:25:00 PM
Well, you do bring life (or death) to one of my favorite months of the year, which truly does make this sad for me. Love your use of personification here. Excellent write. Love, Shar
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