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Death of Desires By a Sin

Evrytime that you were near My eyes would have that glitter My heart would beat faster My smile would get wider My feelings for you were so very strong I jst wanted to kiss you And hold you for real long As u gently rolled down the Tips of ur fingers on my skin desires grew within me I knew I was comitting a sin But with all that passion I only craved for more It felt so true to the heart I assumed that it was pure The temptations to stay close to you Made me so intoxicated That I cudnt realize tht this Wasn’t gonna stay and that we would be separated That's when I felt The fear of this sin While ur passionate touch Went on my skin In a moment my heart, My body, my soul, Were filled with nothing but guilt - Guilt of the sin Guilt of the temptations The regret was so deep Nothing within me was left it killed all the desires, the passion, the tempt no more was in me Just lik a dead rose As it slowly blackens Was how my heart had chose Blackened with the sins Wilted by the guilt and that's when I realized it was a - death of desires by a sin.

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Date: 8/19/2010 11:13:00 PM
Beautifully sad, a compassionate write describing your love for someone yet the regret that kills all desires from sin. I loved it. There's a few typos tho, you should get those checked, other than that, this poem is utterly imaginative and creative. Keep smiling, Sami.
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:53:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Salwa. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2010 8:22:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed this poem
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Date: 8/14/2010 2:20:00 PM
thnku very much linda !
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Date: 8/13/2010 10:20:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/13/2010 6:47:00 PM
Thank you !!
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Date: 8/13/2010 6:44:00 PM
A SADFUL THOUGHT AS I READ YOUR POEM WITH A BEAUTIFUL OPENING. THAN IT LEAD TO SORROW. loved YOUR PoEM*~SKAT
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