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Death of An Innocent

Observe this scene: a family is found inside a grotto. Hear their sad lament. They're rooted in despair while gathered round the form of their adored: an innocent. Without a warning, and with no delay, there came the hooded one who wields a scythe (that reaper grim that God alone can stay), to take away a daughter, fair and blithe. Unchanged through time is grief of those who love, then lose a little one. And some lose hope! Some search for answers in the sky above; the light is there, but some in darkness grope. Oh, see! Beyond the clouds and mother's wail, an angel guides a child through a parting veil. For Brian Strand's A FREE CHOICE AGAIN any form/any theme max 14 lines Poetry Contest For Sara Kendrick's "Sonnet Me" Contest

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Date: 8/19/2020 11:10:00 AM
This is deep and powerfully moving. It is a sadness I wish no parent had to endure, but you fill the room with a heavenly hope and an angel's comforting presence. Beautifully touching.
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Date: 11/25/2011 5:54:00 PM
Excellent, moving poem Andrea. Congratulations on your wonderful win.
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Date: 11/23/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest today Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:33:00 AM
I had not seen this one before. So glad you chose to enter it. Beautifully done Andrea
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Date: 10/6/2011 2:01:00 PM
This is your oldest piece now - I remember this sweet write. Love it just as much now. No, I haven't been able to get on Soup much lately, and I haven't even been able to log in sometimes, LOL
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:15:00 PM
Aced this. Tight write with Dynamite Delight! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:48:00 AM
coming back here to congratulate you for this poignant piece! no wonder at all you are in the winners list, sweetie :) hugs to you :)
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:24:00 PM
poignant write, heartie! i like this side of you thst awes me...whooty congrats for the fine win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:16:00 PM
Hard topic, sad sad happening congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2011 11:20:00 AM
Good to see you in the top ten Andrea. Congratulations on your worthy poem in seventh place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/13/2011 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful - many congrats, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Sara, Andrea
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Andrea in the contest "Sonnet Me" sponsored by Sara Kendrick. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:08:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your super win in the contest Sonnet me .Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:45:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your big win in Sonnet Me contest luv.. enjoy my friend..
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Date: 4/12/2011 5:59:00 PM
Heat-wrenching yet redeeming. Beautiful sonnet, Andrea. Many congrats on your sensational win. Lainie
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one even thought it brought tears...Thanks for entering it in my contest..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2011 3:52:00 PM
A pretty picture if we can just hang on to it when we mourn. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:05:00 AM
A family of many in today's society Andrea. Beautifully written by a person with heart. Good luck in Sara's contest....:)
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Date: 4/8/2011 8:42:00 PM
a very sad and moving write.
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Date: 4/8/2011 1:28:00 PM
Oh so sad Andrea but a great write.Most of my poems ar of my life.My uncle once said I was a life writer cause my poems were of my life.I'm sorry your relationship with your granny wasn't great.Thanks for the very kind comment .~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa
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Date: 4/8/2011 11:04:00 AM
whoot... this errie but beautiful chill devours me, heartie! a different slant for the tourney; exquisite, andrea!! just posted my own just now as well... winning should be easy! hope you're okay! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/8/2011 10:48:00 AM
Andrea, Wow what a magnificent write. Should be a winner. Have a great weekend and the best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2011 9:16:00 AM
Reading this reminded me of J.R. Richards' "A Beautiful End". That is one beautiful song and this is one beautiful sonnet, both about a girl who died young. Ah. As for your curiosity: You and I share a same thread then. We could get along I imagine! Forgive me though, but I am enjoying my anonymity here, so I really don't want to divulge who I am (thus the short stint here). The person whose initials I truly have has posted quite a number of poems here. Is that the real me? Or not at all?
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Date: 4/8/2011 7:38:00 AM
So sad and then with such a lovely ending - beautiful : ) Jack
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