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Death of a Seventeen Year Old

We had her for seventeen years Now we shed a flood of tears Her smile her ***** we’ll miss Remembering her life today We talk about her qualities We share her memories With family, friends and enemies This cold, winter, rainy, December day A text went out to a friend A stop sign went unnoticed A crash took her life A phone call around midnight A church, gymnasiums fill with folks To honor and lament her death My daughter, sister, cousin, friend Her memory we celebrate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/19/2010 3:10:00 PM
A young girl my kids went to school with died and her death has shocked and saddened many. Her funeral was packed. I wrote this after I got home sadden, but thinking's about my 4 young ones.
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Date: 12/19/2010 6:05:00 AM
May her memory ever be etched in your psche. Your poem has hallowed her days! May her presence be deeply felt during this hallowed season!
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Date: 12/19/2010 2:22:00 AM
Very sad and touching poem Barbara.Very sorry that you have gone through such painful experience.-kashinath
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