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Death of a lake

A lake, landmark to locate easily my nest like home, a center to ever widening concentric city, lies without life, no fishes, no ducks, no mosquitoes, not even microbes exist within. Like a frozen body intact, lake is kept as a keep-sake, for there will be no other places to dump such waste; chemicals flowing from a few hundred factories, slush, sewage, garbage reaches her in hushed silence. When people flock to see with curious eyes the fire and froth issuing from the lake, taking pictures, striking unison notes-aw’s, wow’s, as if it is all of the lake’s doing, my ears hurt-ache-burn. I see a crow sitting on electric pole cocking its head, looking restlessly at people or mourning the death of lake, I can’t say, but, with as expressionless face as that of the crow I turn with heavy steps, ruffled, helpless, towards my home.

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Date: 5/18/2024 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations sweet friend. Very proud of you !
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Date: 5/22/2024 8:02:00 PM
Thank you very much dear poet.
Date: 5/14/2024 2:58:00 AM
Hmmmm seems I have to stand in line to tell you that I love this poem. So glad that you kept some of your previous poems. I am sure like me a lot of folk would be glad to read the older ones as well as the new ones that you write dear friend. Best wishes , Wen
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Date: 5/14/2024 6:50:00 AM
you bring so much hope. you bring unforced smile. thank you for the visit & kind words dear poet. Thank you for the good wishes.
Date: 5/13/2024 6:41:00 PM
Thriveni, welcome back to PS, what a powerful and deep poem so wonderfully penned, well done, I have a contest going on if you are interested in entering something, I would love that, hugs, Constance
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Date: 5/14/2024 1:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for the sweet words of 'welcome'. It means so much to me. I appreciate your visit and kind friendship. I'll be grateful for the joy of your words.
Date: 5/13/2024 7:42:00 AM
Dear Thriveni, What a powerful elegy. The lake as a "landmark" turned lifeless speaks volumes. The imagery of the "frozen body" as a "keepsake" is chilling. Your poem wonderfully highlights the callousness behind the destruction. The tourist reaction to a "fire and froth" show is infuriating, starkly contrasting the true tragedy. I also loved how the crow's ambiguity adds a layer of mystery - is it a witness or a mourner? The poem leaves a heavy weight, urging action. - Blessings, Daniel
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 5/14/2024 1:35:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit sir, I very much appreciate your thoughts on this poem. I remain grateful for your blessings.
Date: 5/13/2024 5:14:00 AM
Welcome back! Awesome poem thriveni, but quite sad. Human activity is changing the landscape of our planet home, and not in a good way
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Date: 5/13/2024 5:54:00 AM
Sad but true. This is a previously published poem based on true events. Thank you dear poet for that sweet word 'welcome'. I owe you this kindness.

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