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Death, My Friend

His broad shoulders tremble in fear Fingernails are caked with dirt and yellow Some sneer, some are in tear Some cheer, some are mellow He feels that death is near The trench is like a death row He has a tight grip on his gun Remembers the time in the meadow downhill He thought war would be fun Now he wonders if he will kill On the black soil where he will run Where minutes from now he might be still His feet are damp in his muddy socks, Runs his fingers over his bristle He sees a rat scampering across the rocks Sees and hears an exploding missile His scowling officer looks at the clock The officer hesitates and blows the whistle He hurries up the ladder and joins the war cry Clumsy feet trip on scattered litter He feels a bullet strike him. Another! His body leaks red dye As he falls, all he sees is a blur He takes his last breath and dies The blue sky above is calm, unaware of the massacre

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 9:10:00 PM
Jack, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/29/2013 6:57:00 PM
Sad, and very descriptive. Jack"Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Jack Kim
Date: 4/30/2013 4:54:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!

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