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Death Gone Bad

To be cast into the abyss With-out so much As a Spirit attached ------ Is an Obituary GF *When you are cast into the abyss, with-out a Spirit OR Soul being attached, That mean's that you are already dead! The next step called for is to "the Obituary". ******* Follow me on facebook@mediancircle131********

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2011 8:53:00 AM
Whilst I like the words you've chosen, the meaning of the overall poem / sentence is flawed an obituary is a notice of death, which isn't really what you are describing. An interesting piece all the same.
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