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Death By Meth

The cause of his death Because he chose to do meth He started out with a line But it was no longer fine He started to smoke in a glass bowl He knows hes loosing his soul Feeling not one emotion With the impulse of another notion He desires to put it on a spoon Cooking it not to quick but not to soon He places it into the needle sticks it in him arm Starting to cause major bodily harm Instantly hes enjoying his high But doesnt even get to say goodbye Death decides its his time to go Just a thought... But maybe he should have said no??

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Date: 7/6/2015 12:57:00 AM
Today I started rewriting a short story that I wrote 7 yrs ago it's a true story that happened to me when I was 10 I jus may post it here when it's finished so give me time I'm really enjoying the feedback it's inspired me to write more jus bein on here for a single day I only wanted to test my writing really to see if its still good. I didn't expect replays at all let alone the 1st day here Ty all so much Ps this max character thing sux horridly
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Date: 7/5/2015 11:43:00 PM
That is sad, to die this way. Christine Tansy , this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Christine Tansy
Date: 7/6/2015 12:51:00 AM
I kept on writing have had 2 much writing destroyed exes it never stopped me lost again apt fire 12-7-12 I'm now 37 don't look it ev1 says I can't be older than 23 secret stay away frm hard drugs smile &lol no matter how much it hurts bn thru it all name it its happened cept bein shot unless u count bb guns
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Christine Tansy
Date: 7/6/2015 12:41:00 AM
Hi skat call me Christi, lil bout me if u havnt read my prev reply in these comms I've bn writing since I was a kid wrote my 1st book when I was 7 it was called the magical unicorn my gma taught me 2 put the paper 2gether write the story&taught me how to make a hard back cover& glue the pages she was my 1st inspiration
Date: 7/5/2015 10:05:00 PM
Thx for the welcome. :-) still new to this,I'm catchin on&have more poetry,stories & songs that I've been tryin to put together for yrs my baby father's tore up &burned all my writings drawings said I won't be nobody U see I'm still doin it& had apt fire lost all that was on paper so here I go again, not gonna give or quit, I write dif types stuff I'm spur of the moment unpredictable& it shows in a my writing u never no what to expect so I hope people will enjoy it & be inspired by it Ty again
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:28:00 PM
it' is reality, Christine, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Christine Tansy
Date: 7/5/2015 10:07:00 PM
Idk how to follow or let u follow me but I am definitely lookin forward to feedback and support I'm def lucky to have found this site u can call me Christi tho for short and it's nice to meet u
Date: 7/5/2015 5:07:00 AM
It's reality...a reality that a lot of people turn a blind eye to, that don't want to see what's really going on in society in neighborhoods or are in denial. Maybe this could encourage society and give hope and inspiration to someone who needs help or someone who can help someone, maybe even get people aware of this horrible drug along with other drugs. Who knows really? All we can do is have faith and pray for the best.
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Date: 7/5/2015 4:01:00 AM
Very sad. But well penned!
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