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Death By Deceit: the Heart of a Lied To Lover

Don't feed me with the bullshit. I can't handle all the lies. I just might overdose. I just may up and die. Although you lie so sweetly its wearing oh so thin. You words flow just like velvet I can't help but let you in. Just don't feed me with the bullshit. It only makes me cry. I just might overdose. Why can't you try the truth, you just might be surprised. You kill me oh so softly with each word that you speak. I'm wearing down, oh baby I feel like I can't breathe. You kept feeding me with the bullshit. Now i"m laying six feet underground. Where did I go wrong? All I did was love you, gave you my affection. Bu all you did oh baby was write me a death sentence. I now bid you adue. A sweet fair-well goodbye. I can honestly say I loved you. I just wish we could have survived.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/25/2016 2:06:00 PM
Marcellus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:45:00 PM
Marcellus, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/1/2011 7:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marcellus. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:38:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight... have fun on the Soup Site and share with luv.. Happy New year too..
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