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Death By Carolina Reaper

We interrupt our program to bring you this imporrr…tant messssssss… White wall… canvas of blood… symmetrical… battered consciousness of time…signals switched? (Aberration) password: “pepper” … red skin of the burdened goddess… breaking the fourth wall… shattering innocence… breath of hunger… awaken… (I…resist) teardrops soften… like rain on a coffin… but her memory… my gift, not mine to give… heterogenesis, external causation… impute… (I re…sist) before the chamber door… revelation of angles… wings unfolding… the golden ratio… in the palm of my hand… rain of salt… offerings for the virgins… recalibrate… the heart of the goat… strike me dead!

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Date: 11/3/2023 11:39:00 PM
a bit confused, but i bet it makes total sense to you... my favorite line goes "teardrops soften… like rain on a coffin"
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 9:02:00 PM
thank you for reading -
Date: 11/3/2023 7:12:00 PM
I believe Inky has said it all Mat. This is a fabulously dark and haunting write...a melodrama played to perfection. I enjoyed reading! :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/3/2023 8:50:00 PM
much gratitude
Date: 10/27/2023 10:20:00 PM
Whoa this is a whole different level of creative wordplay! I am in awe! Especially that first line and also the flow of this brilliant and hauntingly dark and deep write truly left me in awe! Inspired! And impressed! Very well delivered and unique! Absolutely loved reading this
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 10/27/2023 10:39:00 PM
thank you for the kind words - went down a spicy rabbit hole with this one

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