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Death Bed

sullen death-bell tolls for my own absconding soul no wailing required as my skirmishing-days past my ultimate doom is close

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/20/2015 3:57:00 PM
Very nice to hear sound used, the first part of a tanka is very haiku like which it should be! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
This is deep Nehpets, well done..PD
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Date: 2/15/2015 11:56:00 PM
Nehpets, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nehpets, well written poem. Blessings Eve
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