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Death Bed

Ripples of sand under my foot, hurricane I stir. From the cocoon of fire I break through with the wings of a phoenix I fly like a flash of lightening soaring into the sky the roar of thunder god shatters the silver cloud and in the glassy rain drops as they fall my reflection pierces into my heart of hearts losing sight of the truth I tremble and tumble As a fallen star from sky in to the ocean I splashed salty water gallons gulped sinking to the ocean floor weeds and sea urchins made my death bed and entangled bond with guilt were cut loose by the last breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/29/2014 4:51:00 PM
RAVI, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/26/2014 11:33:00 AM
Very vivid imagery, I love the honesty. Congratulations on your win Ravi. Thanks much for entering my contest, sorry to take so long telling you so.
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Date: 3/22/2014 10:26:00 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, ravi
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