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Death Becomes Her

baby im here standing right beside you cant you feel me breathing dont you feel my touch why wont you look at me why are you ignoring me why wont you hold my hand i speak to you but you never respond thought we had a tight bond i lay down beside you but you act like im not here you walk around the house like you live alone get mad scream throw something am i not a thought in your mind i look in the mirror but see no reflection my skin is white my heart is not beating you are the table alone eating my presence doent linger in this home anymore im not of this world like i was before IM DEAD!!!!!!

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Date: 5/27/2009 9:05:00 AM
I love this form! Good write sister! Don't worry about it it is kind of confusing lol. Ur lil brother
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Date: 5/27/2009 8:02:00 AM
Hi Brandy... all I can say is that this poem is so familiar to someone so close to me... she could have written it herself... the honesty in this poem his heart wrenching........
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