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Death Any Time

Death is life's greatest Mystery! Not God, not soul, Neither the heaven nor hell, Or laws of nature; The absolute, certain truth -- You are bound to end up dead! ~09/21/14 ~For Dr. Ram Mehta's 'Choka Me' contest ~Form: 5,7,7,5,7,7.

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Date: 9/28/2014 11:18:00 PM
Congrats for your win Abdul, you have penned the truth so nicely.
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:47:00 PM
I don't know about that. DEath is certain, but where we are going is not certain. That for me is the greater mystery! Love the ending. So true so true.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/28/2014 10:46:00 AM
"Dust unto Dust", Man! "...for dust thou art, and unto dust shalt thou return." --Genesis 3:19
Date: 9/27/2014 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Abdul.
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:58:00 AM
Interesting piece, congratulations.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/27/2014 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Richard.
Date: 9/27/2014 8:08:00 AM
Very interesting write, Abdul. Death can arrive any time...but those who understand God and what he stands for know that death is only temporary....life will follow. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/27/2014 9:59:00 AM
Ha, If someone can make me understand God! Then, I'll follow death to life...or, is it the other way around? Thanks for your comments.
Date: 9/27/2014 6:13:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and support.Congrats on the win, Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/27/2014 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for your consideration.

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