Death

It comes like a shadow; quietly. No one can know when it strikes. It may be now, the next hour, or tomorrow. A lifeless body that frightens everybody is the only mark that it leaves in its wake.....

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Milton Robertson

Date: 6/6/2015 7:56:00 AM

Frighting, A good write and true. When walking with The Lord, you'll know, when it comes, you are about to take the next step. GOD BLESS.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/7/2015 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Milton. God bless you too.

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/5/2015 6:03:00 AM

Awesome description of death Teddy.. Thank you for popping in on my side of the world. Hope your weekend will be a brilliant one

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/6/2015 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Wilma! You are always very much welcome!!! Have a blissful weekend too!!!! *^_^*

Max Corvus

Date: 5/29/2015 9:08:00 AM

Nice, not exceptional, but nice. I'd like to hear that one played at a Goth concert.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/29/2015 10:21:00 AM

Lol. I wrote my poem to fit more like in a rap song. For concerts, that came as a surprise to me. Thank you for enjoying my read Max! ;-)

Skat A

Date: 5/28/2015 1:31:00 PM

cool write

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/29/2015 12:43:00 AM

Thank you Skat! *^_^*