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Death, I'm told to be frightened of you, you should be one of my greatest fears. But you'll come no matter what I do, followed by abject anguish and tears. Your arrival's portrayed as a crime in your sinister cowl, grave and stark. For history's maligned you through time, a reaper of life shrouded in dark. I see no malice within your deed, you're as essential to life as birth. Wisdom is born of logic and need, and I've come to understand your worth. We wear mortal bodies like a suit, tailored to fit ego and belief. But our souls are in constant pursuit of release, our time here is so brief. You bring closure when life's at its end, opening doors for souls to walk through. And I look upon you as a friend, for life, could not exist without you. (Quatrain) 4/16/2015

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Date: 4/12/2018 9:54:00 PM
Stopped to say hello and congrats! bbn
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Date: 4/10/2018 2:34:00 AM
Wow. Congratulations on your win. If you have truly arrived at that message (and I don't doubt that) you are way ahead on the wisdom score...Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 4/10/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Kai, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2018 11:58:00 AM
Back with most deserving congrats, Emile.
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Date: 4/9/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2018 8:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 4/7/2018 3:51:00 PM
This is a fine poem, and I share in its sentiments as I learned almost 50 years ago that death is a door, not a wall. And the 4th stanza is a knock-out!!!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/7/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thank you very much L.J., your friendly visit is most encouraging and truly appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/7/2018 12:19:00 PM
Excellent write, Emile, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/7/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Eve, your support and friendly visits are most encouraging and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 3/9/2018 9:15:00 AM
WOW - how serene and awesome. A most definite FAVE for me, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/9/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your support and friendly visits are most encouraging and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 5/18/2015 5:39:00 PM
study up on meter and stressed syllables and you canmake this read much better. "Understand" has too many syllables; use a shorter word such as "grok" which shows your depth of vocabulary. . .or rewerite the sentence. Steady meter makes your work memorable and more easily memorized or spoken. Loch
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2015 8:47:00 PM
Thanks Loch, I appreciate your support, but each line has nine syllables as is. Emile.
Date: 4/16/2015 9:08:00 AM
marvellous pen Emile so powerful hugs 7 fav
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/16/2015 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

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