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Death

eyes and blood all over my face am i dead really, really dead. but why do i still see your laugh inside my head that same very day you pushed me around like i was your toy doll doe it have to be this way for you to hurt others while i just sit back and hide in your shadows

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Date: 4/17/2013 8:05:00 AM
nice write
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Date: 4/16/2013 5:01:00 PM
Haleigh :-) . Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/12/2013 8:09:00 AM
Powerful and very descriptive-- taking a stand on abuse. Great write!! Welcome to P/Soup
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