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Time fell fast 
Things became hard
Worries were vast
Lives begain scared

Hopes endlessly hidden
All things seemed forbidden
Days filled with darkness
Lives consumed and left sparkless

Awaiting the doom
Sitting only in gloom
Heaven wept
No souls were kept

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  1. Date: 7/17/2012 6:37:00 AM
    A beautiful poem of death Ruth, well penned, have a great day, Vie

    Courtney Avatar Courtney Courtney
    Date: 7/18/2012 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 7/17/2012 1:00:00 AM
    Could be a much better poem if more heart and effort were put into it. Regardless, its essence as a poem can be salvaged if the author wants to rescue it from its current state.

    Courtney Avatar Courtney Courtney
    Date: 7/18/2012 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    maybe next time I like it