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Dear Stranger,

I tried my best To show you part of me. The side of me You've never seen. I'm more than a daughter; I'm an artist, a writer, A sister, a friend And now to you a stranger. I have a question, Have you ever realized That I have my own voice And I have my own life? I'm not relinquishing my soul-- I won't sell it to anyone. If I can't be myself Then who will I become? I have a mind of my own, A heart and gifts. I have a life of my own And it's mine to live. Yes, you gave me life, But it's not yours to give. You gave me this life So I can learn to live. Tell me, have we met? Have you ever seen me? Or did you just see my music, My tee shirts and jeans? It's not what I look like, It's how I look at myself. I'm embarrassed to show you it. Only you and no one else. Don't be disappointed, Mad or upset. Be happy I have morals, A mind and self-respect. I'm the person I want to be. I stay true to myself, Meaning I'm me. I'm me for no one else. I'm smart and independent Because you made me this way. I'm no longer fearful and afraid, That's not how I wanted to stay. Now do you know me? Or should I continue? I'm making you realize, I'm not being rude. So make your decision. Please, I just want an answer. Not to be disrespectful, But are you my mom or my mother?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/14/2012 9:34:00 PM
wow i really like this one good work
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/15/2012 9:38:00 AM
Thank You(:
Date: 1/11/2012 7:16:00 PM
Wow! Very impressive write that speaks volumes. Your mom sure did some things right as you have become such a wholesome adult, strong and gifted! Thank you for sharing!
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/11/2012 7:20:00 PM
Thank you.(: I just wish she'd realize that and speak to me. :/
Date: 1/11/2012 6:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry Skylar, congratulations. best wishes for a Happy new year. Elizabeth
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/11/2012 4:51:00 PM
Thank you.(:
Date: 1/9/2012 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on the week`s win Skylar!! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/9/2012 12:51:00 PM
Thank you!(:
Date: 1/9/2012 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Skylar. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/9/2012 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much ! :DD
Date: 1/3/2012 7:58:00 AM
i wish they do put some emoticons applausing. because you deserve it, what some writting, wow. thank you for sharing
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/3/2012 2:20:00 PM
Thanks :D
Date: 1/3/2012 12:19:00 AM
Verse with power and strength. Like Sour Patch Kids...Sour and hard to take on...but DELICIOUS indeed!
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Skylar Rae Montgomery
Date: 1/3/2012 12:21:00 AM
Thank you.(:

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