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Dear Santa I Want

Dear Santa "I want", I wrote one day Knowing just what mother would say You don't say," I want" but "please may I" For things you would like,...will give it a try Santa I would like a puppy or two Promise to feed it and pick up the poo So, can I have, I want, I really need A wriggly puppy getting so excited it peed Penned 4/12/2017

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/24/2017 6:50:00 PM

just be extra careful when you are scooping the poop Seren!!! Happy Christmas and have a wonderful 2018:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/24/2017 7:13:00 PM

Yes u could end up with a broken arm lol

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 3:52:00 PM

So cute!

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/23/2017 4:12:00 PM

Hi Richard so nice to see you again . Thanks for stopping by....Seren

Eve Roper

Date: 12/19/2017 8:11:00 PM

:-) Love it! Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2017 7:00:00 PM

ha ha ha I was always told I want doesn't get - this made me smile Seren:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Ella

Date: 12/3/2017 9:54:00 PM

Seren, this is a fun one! :D I can just her "mother's voice" and all the excitement a wriggly puppy can bring.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/3/2017 6:57:00 PM

And, did you get it young lady and only care for him until the novelty wore off? (can you hear my Mother voice?) This is so cute, I see it as a poem tied in a red bow. All the best ... CayCay

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/23/2017 4:13:00 PM

Lol I don't think so....Seren