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Dear Mistaken

Dear Mistaken Remember the lack of care in your joyous GLORY; Remember the lack of sincerity in your beautiful STORY; Remember the lack of wisdom in decisions you MADE; Remember the lack of mercy as you dug in the BLADE; Remember the lack of humanity as you laughed LOUDLY; Remember the lack of empathy as you stood PROUDLY; Remember the lack of friendship in your deceptive KINDNESS; Remember the lack of heart in your ways of BLINDNESS; Remember the lack of gratitude you may not MEND; Remember the lack of compassion when it all ENDS; In the end, you should have known BETTER; In the end, the sorrow felt as you read the LETTERS; In the end, you stare at the stones you have been COLLECTING; In the end, you value the diamonds you have been NEGLECTING; In the end, karma came by and got you CHECKED; In the end, you've ended up WRECKED; In the end, you question your naive QUICKNESS; In the end, you are on bended knees pleading for FORGIVENESS; In the end, all that is golden has been TAKEN; In the end, you are only remembered as MISTAKEN. By H.F. All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the week`s win Hussein! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/9/2012 11:48:00 AM
Hello, which contest have i won? Thank you Anne
Date: 1/9/2012 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Hussein. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol
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Hussein Farah
Date: 1/9/2012 11:49:00 AM
Hi Carol, which contest have i won?
Date: 1/5/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Faith Verses" contest Hussein. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2011 11:23:00 AM
a very interesting read. Which scripture were you denoting? At first I was thinking this might be the one about judge not lest you be judged. this poem could denote many of the scriptures I think. Congrats on your win.
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Hussein Farah
Date: 12/30/2011 11:44:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thank you. Well the poem was ment to illuminate the mistake in judgement we all make. I was denoting the Bible story of Josephs who was sold off by his brothers. Thany you dear...
Date: 12/29/2011 3:26:00 PM
Hussein, Merry Seasons and Happy new Reasonings in the New Year... I am honored that your chose to enter my contest... My hope is that you find honor in your placement. Agape, Moses
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Hussein Farah
Date: 12/30/2011 11:45:00 AM
John, happy new year and thank you. Glad to enter your contest....God Bless

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