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Dear Mistaken

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Dear Mistaken

Dear Mistaken

Remember the lack of care in your joyous GLORY;
Remember the lack of sincerity in your beautiful STORY;
Remember the lack of wisdom in decisions you MADE;
Remember the lack of mercy as you dug in the BLADE;
Remember the lack of humanity as you laughed LOUDLY;
Remember the lack of empathy as you stood PROUDLY;
Remember the lack of friendship in your deceptive KINDNESS;
Remember the lack of heart in your ways of BLINDNESS;
Remember the lack of gratitude you may not MEND;
Remember the lack of compassion when it all ENDS;
In the end, you should have known BETTER;
In the end, the sorrow felt as you read the LETTERS;
In the end, you stare at the stones you have been COLLECTING;
In the end, you value the diamonds you have been NEGLECTING;
In the end, karma came by and got you CHECKED;
In the end, you've ended up WRECKED;
In the end, you question your naive QUICKNESS;
In the end, you are on bended knees pleading for FORGIVENESS;
In the end, all that is golden has been TAKEN;
In the end, you are only remembered as MISTAKEN.

By H.F.
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  1. Date: 1/9/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on the week`s win Hussein! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise

    Farah Avatar Hussein Farah
    Date: 1/9/2012 11:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello, which contest have i won? Thank you Anne
  1. Date: 1/9/2012 8:02:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Hussein. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol

    Farah Avatar Hussein Farah
    Date: 1/9/2012 11:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Carol, which contest have i won?
  1. Date: 1/5/2012 12:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Faith Verses" contest Hussein. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/30/2011 11:23:00 AM
    a very interesting read. Which scripture were you denoting? At first I was thinking this might be the one about judge not lest you be judged. this poem could denote many of the scriptures I think. Congrats on your win.

    Farah Avatar Hussein Farah
    Date: 12/30/2011 11:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, thank you. Well the poem was ment to illuminate the mistake in judgement we all make. I was denoting the Bible story of Josephs who was sold off by his brothers. Thany you dear...
  1. Date: 12/29/2011 3:26:00 PM
    Hussein, Merry Seasons and Happy new Reasonings in the New Year... I am honored that your chose to enter my contest... My hope is that you find honor in your placement. Agape, Moses

    Farah Avatar Hussein Farah
    Date: 12/30/2011 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    John, happy new year and thank you. Glad to enter your contest....God Bless