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December 12, 2012 Dear Me, Advice to Myself ~~~~~~~~~~~ Go through the open door Dreams await you and more Do not be afraid to fail Learning in the end to tell Life is hard, education is best Independence is what I suggest Some people are not always kind Do not be rude but leave those behind Be thankful for your blessings Remember everything is a lesson Be creative, experience life, be keen Go to places you have never seen Find your true love, your soul mate You have time do not rush, it can wait Changes, Suggestions to Myself ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You do not listen to your mother This time make sure you bother Mistakes will always happen to you This time a different path you choose Boyfriends come and go, here and there Thank goodness the last one you let out for air Next time do not believe everything you hear Sometimes people put make believe in your ear Please do not dye your hair pink again Leave the natural color or put highlights in! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ All these things come with love Whatever you do, believe in Heaven above. Love, Me David Williams “Hello/Goodbye” Contest

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Date: 1/8/2013 4:25:00 PM
Dear Holly, Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. an interesting way of you...xox~pd
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Date: 1/6/2013 5:39:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2013 4:16:00 AM
Intelligent and insightful, Holly...love the pink hair part!...Congrats and have a happy and blessed 2013 - Tim
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Holly!! Awesome write indeed! Good day! :)
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Date: 1/1/2013 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend Holly! Happy New Year, too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:26:00 PM
Holly congrats on your win , good advice...have a happy and peaceful New Year...David
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:13:00 PM
Big congrats Holly love and all the best for the new year xx
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:48:00 PM
wow Holly this good, very good...
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:10:00 PM
haha, I love the one about not using pink in your hair! good advice for ANYone of any age, sweetie!!
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Date: 12/13/2012 1:36:00 PM
It is good to see you entering more contests. Lots of good advice here. Good luck with entry.
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:19:00 PM
This is super advice to yourself. Follow it. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 12/12/2012 10:14:00 PM
nice' Sandy
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