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Dear Lord (For Michael Torres)

Dear Lord I thank you for another day clean & free As you know Lord awhile back I received an email One that has troubled me now for months It contained an apology from another person An apology I know wasn’t easy for him to write One that was also very hard for me to read Lord you know how hard I battle with anger How much hate and anger once consumed and controlled my life How I struggle to keep myself balanced Lord you know that I know in my heart I must forgive him As I have been forgiven I know to hold these feelings in my heart Is a sin So many people have forgiven and accepted me into their hearts I owe this not only unto you But to all those who have forgiven me If I am not willing to forgive Then I do not deserve to be forgiven You know Lord I have to say The way you use Antoinette to point these things out And reason with me in a way that I must agree Makes you a cold piece of work And leaves me in a position Where all I can say Is Lord just as you have forgiven me I reckon Michael too shall be forgiven -------------------------------------------------------- This poem was written sometime back and it has been a heavy burden round my neck ever since. What I did I did for all the right reasons in my heart but it is apparent that Michael & Janice do love each other so who am I to Judge. Well anyhow I must do what I feel is right which is to forgive, God Bless, Mj Seems to fit Christies contest very well so I'll enter it in the contest.

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Date: 7/2/2009 12:13:00 PM
Heartfelt and touching poem. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. God bless. Karen
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Date: 7/1/2009 11:56:00 PM
Im glad you wrote this and glad for the release Im sure it gave you. Wonderful win. Love, BG
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Date: 7/1/2009 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Sharon/Christie's contest Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/1/2009 5:58:00 PM
Congratulations Michael...this poem couldn't have been an easy write, but touching and well deserving a win in this contest!~ Carrie
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Date: 7/1/2009 5:17:00 PM
Michael, congrats on your success in Sharon and Christies Contest...Raul
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Date: 5/30/2009 6:10:00 PM
Heartbreaking, forgiveness is something many of us deal with and it is never easy letting go of the hurt and pain to move forward. Being able to forgive and reach out to that person takes courage and you certainly have a lot of that along with many other wonderful qualities. God Bless you for being who you are. I still struggle with letting go of the anger and bitterness of those that have hurt me especially when they have yet to apologize, it is something I have to work on..Love ,Tyesha
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:41:00 PM
My words have caused me heartache because they hurt you Michael. Im sorry it took me so long to respond Ihavent been on the sight. Janice and I think very highly of you we keep you in our prayers. You touch so many lives with your poetry and like the Apostle Paul you were transformed into a desciple to reach others through yourgift of writing. God Bless you Michael Jordan and all you love. MichaelTorres
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:35:00 PM
you in her life. You are very fortunate to for her. I will pray for your knee. I will pray for blessings for you and yours Michael. Im sorry that you never got to know the real me maybe someday we can meet and I can say Im sorry personally. Love your truths and your honesty you have been blessed with a big heart and the gift of writing. Wishing you great health,prosperity, blessings from God but most important my sincerest apology for ever writing anything foolish on my part and ever hurting you
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:26:00 PM
to so many people that love you on this sight. The anger which I channeled my words and words I wish I could take back. Your a good man Michael.Its not whereyou start in life its where you finish . You will finish on top because you worship the same Jesus I do. What you have been through and overcame is in itself a great feat. Janice and I have prayed for your loving family and you.Thank you for your forgiveness and your kind words seasoned with grace. Antoinett is a very lucky woman to have
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:10:00 PM
Dear Michael you were brought into something that you should have never been. You tried to help and comfort because of the thankfullness that you felt for the caring of your beautiful daughter Michaela and your loving wife relationship with Janice. Gossiping and slander is not the christian way. I have forgiven Janice as well as forgiven you. Michael you are a good man and you love Jesus. Your blessed with a wonderful wife daughters and son and many good friends. You are an inspiration to -
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Date: 5/28/2009 6:48:00 PM
What an awesome prayer. In order to ask for forgiveness one must swallow their pride which is one of our hardest things to do. You said a lot in this piece. Great prayer...
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Date: 5/28/2009 9:55:00 AM
Forgiveness is cleansing, and healing...and God Bless those who come to realize that fact. It is never an easy thing, and not taken lightly....but if it comes from the heart, it is a gift to both parties. Love Carrie
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Date: 5/28/2009 9:31:00 AM
Wonderful poetry my friend..your heart is always golden with words..much respect....soup mail.
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Date: 5/28/2009 9:04:00 AM
Michael forgiveness is probably the hardest request the Lord lays upon us, but when you do totally forgive you feel such a release and then comes the peace within. For you know you are pleasing God and that to me is what it's all about. God Bless you for this heart appealing write, truly from the heart. Ron
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Date: 5/28/2009 8:22:00 AM
Simply overwhelming, your beautiful soul. Forgiveness is something so powerful, and something that must be learned and understood. You are a blessing to all who know you. Wonderful to read. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/28/2009 8:04:00 AM
The nuns at school used to tell us that "forgiveness" was the greatest virtue, Michael. Having the capacity to put past mistakes aside and move forward in friendship is the mark of a very spiritual man. God bless you, MJ
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Date: 5/28/2009 6:01:00 AM
The poet must know his human moment ... for we who create ... are being created daily by life's experience, and what do we have to take it when our vessels seethe with rage or simmer with pain ... only human love and forgiveness make us worthy of the gift of courage that faith brings to us. I feel this write, my brother/friend ... power to the pious heart!
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Date: 5/28/2009 5:58:00 AM
aww a great powerful poem, you have a good heart so full of Love and compassion, we might not always understand things but through gods' eyes we can, we have had to walk away from a couple of friends who came a distraction delibratley trying to take our focus off God, we have had to say sorry and that we have to stand with God first and that we will pray for them but they have to leave us to walk the walk and that God comes before anything. anyway a beautiful poem God bless you from diane
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