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Dear Friend

We were friends since day one, always outside having fun. As the day would past, the fun would always last. Until that day I had to go, you held me tight and screamed no! When i go older, i joined the army, never thought it would be better for me. I got a letter that said I had to go to war, when I told my mom, it hurt her like a never ending sore. you are no longer my friend, you're my brother, but its a shame we have to fight each other.

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Date: 1/3/2016 7:19:00 PM
Tenea,, a pleasure to read your poem. Have a great day. SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2013 10:33:00 AM
Touching write this! The value of friendship is so immense that it is a shame that war and a difference of opinion has to tear it apart. You've brought out the emotions very well. Well penned Tenea!
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