Dear Diary

Dear Diary , a lingering thought of nostalgia..... reminiscing..... such a beautiful time in my life the place of a distant dream..... does it take you back..... the life changing music ! the freedom..... our love..... I wonder where you are today..... a deep breath, a sigh I do miss you..... a lingering thought..... a reflection of who we thought we would become a promise to always stay together..... such a beautiful time in my life..... I do miss you.....

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Carrie Richards

Date: 6/30/2010 5:44:00 PM

This is a reflection on you and your softer side...lovely poem! :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/30/2010 11:13:00 AM

You are a sweetie, Rick. So sentimental and thoughtful! Lovely poem, dear. And, yes, I'm sure I'll muster up another contest at some point. Perhaps a different verse form. Limericks are so hard to judge (but fun to read)! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/29/2010 7:39:00 PM

yes my diary days are very precius to me too Rick.. this one is very reminiscent of those days when hiding the notations from peering eyes of my parents... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii who enjoyed.. ready for luau again..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/29/2010 6:55:00 PM

AQ nice personification of the diary. Great image - a lingering thought of nostalgia. Great

Molly Cooper

Date: 6/29/2010 6:21:00 PM

sounds are like music