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Dear Darling

I see you want to die, darling I see it in your eyes I see it on your wrists, your arms Your stomach, hips and thighs. But please, never try to, dear Now, that would be a waste Of a lovely soul Compelling eyes And a very pretty face. ~O

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/6/2014 3:08:00 PM
Good job my lady, it is a pleasure to be in such company and I hope that I may measure up someday
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Date: 7/6/2014 9:35:00 AM
A nice win Olivia...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/6/2014 7:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/6/2014 1:21:00 AM
A very beautiful heartfelt write my dear friend olivia. I like it. Thank u so much for sharing! congratulations on your great win! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 7/5/2014 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Olivia, on a well-deserved fine win!
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Date: 7/5/2014 12:25:00 AM
Very deep and meaningful write, Olivia and congrats on the win
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Date: 7/4/2014 11:20:00 PM
Love is flowing in your write, nice write....congratulations
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Date: 7/4/2014 10:31:00 AM
Olivia,, Congratulations, thank you EVER SO SO much... Keep Enjoying my contest, and my latest blog "Some Poems Are:" if you like. See you around, :) LINDA
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Date: 7/1/2014 10:48:00 PM
sad write,wanting to die is a form of weakness,encourage to fight,life changes in an instant no matter the situation,deep words Olivia
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