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Dear Dad

Oh Dad You didn't smile! You were trembled, and tired And.. feverish, you were! Your eyebrows arched And your lips tight And I didn't smile.. Oh Dad..! You were anxious, you swallow the fear For the fear on me Oh dad.. While, I was growing up! Aah my little heart.. If you were a herb for his cure.. I would surpassed my heart Before the death, block your Eyes from me..! Fatima Nusairat

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Litan Dey

Date: 10/5/2013 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win....

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/8/2013 11:56:00 AM

Litan Dey thank you so much..!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/30/2013 4:10:00 PM

Great work, Fatima! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 10/3/2013 9:58:00 PM

Dear Kelly thank you so much. Appreciated

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/29/2013 11:38:00 AM

Excellent, Fatima. Congrats. Ralph

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/29/2013 1:56:00 PM

Than you Ralph..appreciated !

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/28/2013 9:03:00 PM

nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/29/2013 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Sandra..appreciated

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2013 2:02:00 PM

Fatima,love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/28/2013 2:13:00 PM

Skat_Aux thank you dear,thank you so much

Shanity Rain

Date: 9/28/2013 12:00:00 PM

Excellent description , Congratulations on a well deserved win.

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/28/2013 2:53:00 PM

Yvette Kelley>>thank you dear,appreciated !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2013 5:09:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/28/2013 9:44:00 AM

Dr.Ram thank you so much.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2013 7:43:00 PM

Fatima, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/28/2013 9:46:00 AM

Dear Poet Destroyer A. thank you so much,how nice you are dear! xoxo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 6:54:00 PM

Hello Fatima, I wish I could tag your DEAR DAD poem with one of my own.. enjoyed... :) Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~ Linda

Fatima Nusairat
Date: 9/23/2013 5:49:00 PM

Dear Destroyer thank you for kindly comment !