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Dear Dactyl of Adoration

I'll say them every day you know. Those three well-known monosyllables... When I'm curled up to your contours in the carriage of a train, When I wake and I sense you before I've opened my eyes, When we're staring skywards a long way from home and mapping the stars, When we're carefree and tossing pebble after pebble into the dusk-dressed sea, When you're lost to your music, and don't hear my words, When you finally sleep here and can rest in the calm... Those three well-known, well-used, but well-loved monosyllables, Which now mean much more than they have done before.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/28/2012 7:12:00 AM
The first line beginning 'when...' lovely lilting flow and super 'c' alliteration! '...dusk-dressed sea,' what a LOVELY phrase! You sound like you are classically educated... (a la 'wine dark sea.') and 'dactyl.' Bravo, Annie! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:30:00 PM
Smile ˜ Makes Myself Think of An Infant As His Mummy Gently Rocks They Unto A Lullaby While Suckling Their Tiny Heart Unto Sweeet Serene Sleep * My Love Always, John!:) ˜
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