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Dear Casimir

Dear Casimir… You brighten my day by your shiny little sweet face You make me lose myself in your brown eyes of blueish shades You bring bliss to me with your cheerful inquisitiveness You create paradise for me with you innocent performances Silky brown Curls of yours make me exultant Innocent sweet babbles of yours make me vibrant Tiny stumbling feet of yours walk with so much vigor Sparkling, big eyes of yours look at everything with curious care Very unique kind of an extrovert joy you taught me to feel I forget myself in your presence by becoming a juvenile

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Date: 7/10/2021 3:44:00 AM
This is such a lovely ode, Smita! Children fill our lives with pride and happiness, and with pain sometimes, too. Where would we be without them!! My daughter will have her birthday in a week's time. ~ Regards // paul
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 2:47:00 PM
Yes Paul, we love our children dearly! Happy birthday to your daughter!!
Date: 7/9/2021 2:46:00 PM
oh what a dear person this is describing. love your descriptiveness!
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!!
Date: 7/8/2021 2:03:00 AM
Such a beautiful ode... So true, children are the angels ... Lovely write...
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 2:46:00 PM
They truly are angels! Thanks Supraja!
Date: 7/7/2021 2:29:00 PM
So, you have a wonderful mind and acceptance of what everyone has to offer....even the children. You are indeed in love with life and can live a happy life no matter what happens. What a lovely outlook you have. You have given me some joy here. I also want to thank you for your comment. It means a lot to me.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/14/2021 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Duke for your encouraging comments. I enjoyed reading them.
Date: 7/6/2021 9:15:00 PM
Children are our joy. My only daughter will have her birthday this month. It will be enjoyable I'm sure.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/7/2021 1:01:00 PM
That's right Victor! Happy birthday to your daughter!! Enjoy the celebration!!
Date: 7/6/2021 4:19:00 PM
Beautiful writing! I have learned some very large lessons about love, from sizes much smaller than myself. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 5:58:00 PM
You are absolutely right about that Joe!! Thanks for visiting!
Date: 7/5/2021 9:45:00 PM
A lovely ode to the little one you adore dear Smitha... I too love being with children, listening to their babbles... God bless... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Ani! Children do have amazing powers to keep us joyful while we are with them!!
Date: 7/5/2021 8:51:00 PM
Children make us forget our troubles and true, your love shines for your little one through this wonderful ode, Smita:)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:39:00 AM
Thank you Jo. Children do make us forget our troubles by their innocent babbles and interactions!!
Date: 7/5/2021 1:08:00 AM
Much beauty and much Love into words that reach the heart and enliven the soul.. thank you so much, Smita for sharing your joy and blessings into your poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Besma! True love and joy from the heart pours out such words :)
Date: 7/4/2021 5:40:00 PM
A classic ode, tribute to how our little ones restore and refresh our enthusiasm for the bloom of new life. Thoroughly enjoyed, Smita! ~ Gershon
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Gershon!! The little ones bring so much joy to us!!
Date: 7/4/2021 2:45:00 PM
This ode is so sweet, Smita. Much joy you derive from being there watching tiny movements and listening to babbles. Enjoy the feeling! I see the images in your write.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/6/2021 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! Children do magic on us!!

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