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Dear Abby

DEAR ABBY: I’d never considered killing myself, Until I backed over my little boy. I know I should think about mental help; I break down when I see his untouched toys, His baby pictures, note the absent noise. Only three, he had hardly lived at all. His life cut short, like a sudden dropped call. Resentment’s an anvil in my wife’s eyes - “Why weren’t you careful? It’s all your fault!” The guilt’s SO Heavy…should I end my life? ----Sonless Received 3rd place in "diazin" contest Received 8th place in "Dilemna" contest

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Date: 11/23/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's "A Dilemma" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2011 5:54:00 PM
Congrats Susan on a superb win for this creatively crafted write for the contest luv.. excellent lines...
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Date: 11/22/2011 11:55:00 AM
Another great win for this wonderful write. Congratulations, Susan. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win x
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Date: 11/21/2011 6:53:00 PM
Holy moly. Helluva po here, grats on the place and stuff, digya, namaste~N
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Date: 9/25/2011 2:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Dizain" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:36:00 PM
How well I remember this poem, Susan. Poems like this one seem to stay with the reader. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/22/2011 1:34:00 PM
It is'nt the end of him Susan. Your poem is heartbreaking. But live yourself and accomplish your worthy dream in life. Congratulations on your poem's worthy honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congrats Susan on an exciting win with this dynamic poetry luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:21:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in my contest, Susan
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Date: 9/14/2011 9:35:00 AM
Heart Breaker here, A very sad story...God Bless...Taz
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:57:00 AM
Susan, I hope this didn't happen to your husband or anyone you know. What a terrible thing to try to live with. On an emotional field, you hit this one out of the ballpark. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:08:00 PM
Susan, this is quite a sad one. An you chose an interesting way to do it, as a letter to Dear Abby. Quite unique. what made you think to do one like this? I remember one time I did a triolet on a woman who ran over her child in her own driveway. It's strange how you and I are captivated by similar stories (did you get your story from the news? that is where I got mine) I'm glad I finally am seeing this one. where are you lately here at soup? Luv,Andrea
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