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Deadly Wishes

I looked around for some way of new hope, But no light shone on my face. My heart fell down my body, And it disappeared from all existence. I felt all hope was lost and I could never have hope, Like, there was no chance of my happy life. A light switch was missing from my body and life, Meaning my light of hope was gone forever. I knew I would get low sometime, But there was no warning sign of this horror moment. There was no chance of happiness, My light had burned out. A new burn rang in my heart, My name of passion had no way of getting better.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 11:04:00 AM
NICE TO READ THIS POEM AGAIN LIZ... SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:14:00 PM
liz crockett, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:22:00 PM
Hi Liz,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:02:00 PM
Liz, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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