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deadly kiss

I hungered for his kiss
My lips leaned forward, into his
Then passion exploded everywhere
He gripped my hips, I gripped his hair
Body to body, we became entwined
Flames raged from his mouth to mine 
Desire for more consumed our thoughts
Till grips of steel pulled me off -

“WHAT ARE YOU DOING?” My husband raged
I staggered back, red flooding my face
“WE’RE OVER” he said.  10 seconds of bliss, 
The death of our relationship

for pd's "kissing game" contest

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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 8:56:00 AM
    Wow, this is a fantastic poem. Goodluck in the contest Susan.

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 2:39:00 PM
    Passion flowed... then a twist of fate... great poem... Terry

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:13:00 PM
    Sad - all too common tale! What did you mean about the double meaning of the last line of my poem? Peace and Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 3:45:00 PM
    back to this one I liked so much. Yes, back to the drawing board with you. I hope I can get there at ALL this week!! Luv , andrea

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 2:52:00 PM
    Hot, dangerous, exceptional, nightmarish - perhaps better than a 'slow death' - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:09:00 PM
    oh man! really deadly! cool write!!!!

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 6:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 5:57:00 AM
    Thanks for my placement in your contest (silence).

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:21:00 PM
    hey, susan. please hurry and post some new poems, sweetie. I always look forward to your stuff!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your win, Susan! I really love this one. Actually, this is my second time to read your poem. Thank you very much for making me win in your contest, Silence. You gave me more inspiration to write. More power and blessings always. love and hugs, leonora

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:09:00 PM
    Oh, I see its a winner, congratulations!!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:08:00 PM
    This is wonderful, wow such passion, best of luck in PD's contest and thanks so much for my placement in your Silence Contest, I really enjoyed it and I am very proud you liked my poem. Love Constance

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 4:14:00 PM
    Congrats on yor win.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:58:00 AM
    Love this passionate write, Susan. Thanks very much - loved your contest - and many congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:34:00 AM
    so appreciate my poem being a winner Susan.. so difficult to write these days but will continue till last breath luv.. u r giving us great challenges.. thankxx..

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:46:00 PM
    hey, I never stopped to congratulate this one. BIG congrats, Susan on what I am sure was a well deserved place. I gotta check to see where she placed you. yes, that was fun reading what you said on great minds thinking alike. DO a limerick, Susan!! oh, and thanks for my place in your contest. WHAT a great contest you hosted. I want to blog something about it.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
    Well that was a great surprising ending..Then all the questions begin..Good luck in the contest..Winning material for sure..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..It was fun writing a few just single couplets..Sara

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    Date: 8/25/2012 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, Congrats on your winning work..Sara
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Congrats on your win,Susan! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 10:43:00 AM
    Wow Susan....deadly indeed, love the passion and twist at the end. Awesome write! Hugs