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dults we stand for time has passed us by our childish ways have bloomed into a blight the roots we set, now gnarled, so pained decry, the visages of springtime love's delight. Upon foul winds you've flown, you've left a thief without the strength to be forthright. A fallen limb, a rotting bough bereft, am I to lay alone, as winter comes, as you bloom again within a riper cleft? Is this your wish, and how your pledge succumbs? Never had I dreamed I'd be so harshly left for a younger bloom with naught but dried crumbs. By sins of the flesh, we've been undone. I will not forgive what you've become.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/8/2012 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Delilah's "Adultery" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2012 11:42:00 AM
Outstanding write Debbie! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 11/7/2012 6:13:00 AM
very elizabethan and restrained, debbie... lovely rant.. congrats with huggs!.:)
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Date: 11/7/2012 5:52:00 AM
big congratulations on you grand win friend Debbie... Hugs Maria
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Date: 11/7/2012 12:45:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Debbie xx
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Date: 11/6/2012 11:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win Debbie! You've done it well!
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Date: 11/6/2012 10:27:00 PM
Great write. Well done.....Seren
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Date: 11/6/2012 8:30:00 PM
Dear Lady,, congratulations in Delilah's " Adultery , forgive or not to forgive " contest. Enjoyed stopping by to read her winners. Good Night~ Always & Forever PD"
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Date: 10/20/2012 2:26:00 PM
this is so profound Debbie, and so much sadness, ....a poem of regret?
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Date: 10/18/2012 4:27:00 PM
Good poem Debbie. We forgive , but we don't forget. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:24:00 AM
Oh!!Unforgiveness is a harsh sentence on the one who does not forgive for it eats away at them..Enjoyed reading for it has great rhythm, flow, and rhyme to it..Sara..I will have to try Terza Rima if I haven't already done so..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2012 7:21:00 PM
Always the art of true poetry from you. Wonderful piece Debbie. Hugs n luv Michael. Ps. No Soup mail was received Hun. When did u send it ?
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Date: 10/17/2012 6:05:00 PM
So much emotions here. Subtle expresssions of sadness and at the same time anger. Good read. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/17/2012 5:09:00 PM
Wow! This is fantastic! I love it my dear friend, Debbie! I hope I can write this form next time. Thank you so much also for the thoughts and knowledge you've shared. It's so much appreciated. love always, LG
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