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Dead Winter

The snow, blistering down Freezing my ice cold veins I shake and shiver all over So violently, how long to live Can I make it through this night Dimly lit by cold lampposts My path is obscured by the snow I trudge on, walking forward along My eyes try to freeze shut Painful, my fingers don’t move I can hardly walk, so cold The destination is not in sight The snow is falling sideways And so dark, the light barely glows I trip and fall, my feet are frozen My legs are nearing demise I feel the dream world approaching I just want some sleep To forget about the cold, freezing cold I slip off to my ending I die the deep sleep of winter Russell Sivey Entrant to LeeAnn Sidney's "Dead Winter" contest

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Date: 1/16/2012 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "DEAD WINTER" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:53:00 AM
A great win Russell congratulations x
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Date: 1/15/2012 10:38:00 PM
RUSSELL,, a wonderful win ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours truly,..p.d.
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Date: 12/4/2011 4:00:00 PM
good entry for the contest, I can feel that hypothermic chill...thanks for your sweet comments on my work :-)
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:26:00 PM
Powerful piece, my friend
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winner for this contest..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I had fun writing all of those..It made my morn..Sara
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