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Dead Thoughts

As I walk upon the dead leaves It reminds me of the loneliness The absence of the air from within My body, my mind and the soul The time when those grasses were green A silent word, without even hearing Could amplify the voice, yet inaudible Un-understandable, but felt in the air But now, its nothing like before Things have changed A thought was just enough to Hear that voice But now, are those leaves that are dead Or I have dead thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/30/2009 9:21:00 AM
Some of these lines show great use of imagery. I like this shorter poem of yours. The way you compare dead leaves with the loneliness inside. Andrea
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Date: 11/22/2009 5:29:00 AM
So sad, but you can change your thoughts! take a look at my poem, Brim your Minds Cup, I hope you see things differently, love Simone
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