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Leaves are falling outside my window, red stained burnt orange and gold floating down like swirling dancers blood painted ghosts of summer. Listening I hear a tear and a cry, quiet words the leaves are talking they whisper sadness at their passing withering away beautifully decaying. Outside I gather many to my heart, fragile colors they sigh in my hands oh don't weep I will save you in my diary I will press you. All the cold winter you will be safe, kept warm between pages of words until I open that page and you fall decayed dead brittle you fall apart. ___________________________ September 15, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Dead Leaves Talking Copyright Protected, ID 16-829-310-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Leaves Talking Sponsor, John Lawless Fourth Place

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Date: 9/21/2016 9:38:00 AM
Broken Wings- beautifully written, as always... I hate to see fall end and winter coming. congratulations on your placement in the contest lovely friend :)-luloo
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Date: 9/19/2016 12:46:00 PM
Wonderful pic. Makes the writing alive! Congrats :)
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Date: 9/19/2016 2:02:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2016 10:36:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your wonderful fourth placement!
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:43:00 PM
Leaves "beautifully decaying"...you say it all so well, Constance! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/18/2016 8:04:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:26:00 PM
BW, I find in this wonderful poem a gentle metaphor of longing to hold so many so close to the heart. Thank you for entering this wonderful write in the contest.
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:25:00 PM
Lovely, how you try to save them! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/17/2016 7:15:00 PM
terrific writing
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Date: 9/16/2016 5:32:00 PM
Such a fantastic poem. Saving this in my favs.
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Date: 9/16/2016 11:30:00 AM
absolutely stunning Constance good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2016 5:50:00 AM
beautiful imagination.....wings
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:37:00 AM
A stunning creative entry for the contest Constnce! I think this poem will do really well. 7 ; )
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Date: 9/15/2016 10:46:00 PM
Beautiful!!!1
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Date: 9/15/2016 9:57:00 PM
oh I wish I could do one like this. You put so much emotion into it. Like you do with so many of your beautiful poems, dear friend. I love it.
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