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Afterwards, he laughed, 'It's fun to twist the knife!' No, he didn't care she'd been his wife. No more messing with his head! 'Simply snapped,' he said. 'No regret! Dead? I won't fret. Yes, that night in bed, I was truly seeing red. I'm not sorry that I took her life!' Afterwards, he laughed, 'It's fun to twist the knife...' written 21st January for Constance's Andaree Challenge contest

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Date: 2/8/2023 4:18:00 AM
Yikes!
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Date: 2/5/2023 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2023 7:17:00 AM
Jack, oh so dark but wonderful, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance
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Date: 1/26/2023 10:41:00 AM
Wooo! I hope this tale was fantasy! :) Congratulations on your win! I love to read your poems!
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Date: 1/22/2023 7:13:00 AM
WOW Jack I agree with you, how much can one take, she must have been a bad case. Kindest regards, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/22/2023 12:07:00 AM
Definitely a fatalistic poem, Jack. I did tell her to cut down on her nagging, but she would have none of that!!:) Regards // paul
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Date: 1/21/2023 12:21:00 PM
Chilling account ~ well penned. yikes!
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