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Dead Done

Dead done, doomed, I’ll be exumed, Deadly done, did me dead, Dredlocks drawn, will have to pawn, water washes from me bed , Done dead done, is cause to run, Fowl ferret sometimes fed.
john freeman Contest Name Alliteration Poems Please

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Date: 10/26/2015 11:05:00 PM
Talk about darkness, this is the one I love, especially since Alliteration is my favorite poetry form. I miss reading your poems. Glad I saw you online today... LINDA
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Don Johnson
Date: 10/27/2015 12:29:00 AM
confusion reigns cos im insane, or mentally overcome, never mind der olde wolfbane, gone, but bloody not yet-sum :)
Date: 9/12/2011 7:25:00 PM
Great work in this one..Enjoyed..Congrats ..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserve win!!!---Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:13:00 PM
Don, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Dead done" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:19:00 AM
hey Don congrats mate on a great win..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:58:00 AM
Congrats DON on top ten victory with this great Alliteration poetry luv.. thankxx to Zorro too.oh.
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:49:00 AM
A 6th place congratulations Don for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:43:00 AM
Beautifully written with nice Alliteration.Enjoyed.Best wishes.
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/9/2011 6:49:00 AM
just not sure which words to draw fore alliteration :)

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