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Don your hat, grab your cape and walk with me, let's stalk the streets, take in the frosty air on cobbled lanes, necromancing we see confined people of shade suspended there. They strain against the lock, peer through the rail of shadow gate where fear and pain collide, destined to seek the path of peace and fail, eternal slumber forever denied. PC Moss walking the beat on last patrol footsteps in Lock-up yard in echoes sound in concert with the chains of fettered soul never to seek solace beneath the ground. Matins at the Friary can still be heard, the brotherhood who walk, missals in hand. In moonlit armour, Roman legions stirred on Chester Green they march by night's command. Take heed now of the child's plaintive cry hurled from Silk Mill tower in ages past unanswered call to mother, years go by languishing, no comfort to the last. These fragile frames of ours will end their days, we live in hope for immortality We know not what 'twixt here and heaven lay so don your hat and cape, and walk with me. Derby: known to paranormal investigators as 'the dead centre of England'. For contest- Midnight

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Date: 12/19/2015 12:34:00 PM
Unique... beautifully rendered. I love your opening and concluding lines, and everything in between is masterfully written. The mood and atmosphere you have created is spooky and full of mystery. Well done Viv! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/20/2015 1:24:00 AM
Thanks, Keith, yes, those cobbled lanes on a foggy night are not for the faint hearted. Thanks for dropping by, regards, Viv
Date: 11/14/2015 8:13:00 AM
Ah--it takes a special vision to see all this. I would go there with you anytime. These souls are just looking for someone to help them and you have just the right insight. I would watch you do your magic, and run like hell if things go amiss.
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Date: 11/14/2015 8:35:00 AM
Hopefully you can run fster than me, Duke. Viv
Date: 11/13/2015 7:46:00 PM
This is an interesting, and somewhat chilling invitation, Viv. I think I'll be donning my hat and cape and heading the opposite direction from you. I'd rather not know what lays twixt heaven and I. =) Easy 7 on this one.
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Date: 11/14/2015 12:10:00 AM
Derby's ghost walks are chilling enough when you're with a group, Graham, so I wouldn't do one alone. At least not without my teddy bear. Thanks for dopping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/12/2015 4:02:00 PM
An excellent offering, Viv!! Do ghosts exist, one might ask! I have watched some of those ghost programmes on telly, but for all their efforts they have failed to convince me! (This would be a good entry in the 'Midnight' contest.) Regards // paul
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Date: 11/13/2015 12:12:00 AM
I am of a similar disposition to you, Paul, with regards to the ghost hunting programmes- how they get away with just creepy music and night vision cameras and produce noe evidence but still get funding for a further series is beyond me. I enjoy the background history more than the potential headless horseman. Regards, Viv ps- thanks for the pointer on the contest, I missed that one.
Date: 11/12/2015 12:27:00 AM
G'day Viv... another history lesson for me. Thanks mate, I'm really enjoying your tales of yore - Lindsay
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Date: 11/10/2015 5:27:00 PM
what an eerie place it must be. Have you experienced any of it? An informative and descriptive poem.
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:58:00 PM
Yes, Andrea, I have. Not enough characters in this box to relate the tale, so will soupmail you. Thanks for dropping by. Viv x
Date: 11/10/2015 11:02:00 AM
With these kind of horrors, i'd like to walk with you. Nice imagery. Def a 7!
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, njeri. a creepy place at night. Viv x
Date: 11/10/2015 7:49:00 AM
nice walk through the horrors of history and the ghostly shadows they leave behind.
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:43:00 AM
Atmospheric Viv!...and thanks for the comment...Peter.
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:34:00 AM
Cheers, Peter, thanks for dropping by. Hope you're keeping well. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/10/2015 12:51:00 AM
Forgot to Validate. Putting in your rating! Edlynn Nau
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Date: 11/10/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Edlynn, appreciate your comments and visit. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/10/2015 12:50:00 AM
Uhhhh! CHILLS. Chills b/c of the words chosen, chills for the perfect couplets, chills from the pictures I see, chills from the woven and interlaced stories, chills from the unexplained death and chills for the hope of life everlasting. Amazing hours and skill went into this. Thanks for the gift! YES it's a Seven Plus!
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Date: 11/9/2015 10:06:00 PM
Great write, so now I have to steal your cape along with the hat!!! :)
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Date: 11/9/2015 10:37:00 PM
Arthur, grab my cape, and grab my hat, leave your worries on the doorstep..........er, isn't there a song there somewhere? Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv

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