De Force

de FORCE The force does work if you believe, great faith is needed to achieve, Spiritual power lurks within, overcome of negative yin, barrier gets up to leave. Don mental barrier of the mind, hard to overcome when blind, belief system doth insist, you are only half pist,, giving up the half of trying

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Don Johnson

Date: 11/28/2015 4:49:00 PM

mental barrier of the mind, hard to overcome when blind, belief system doth insist, you are only half pist,, giving up the half of trying

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/27/2015 2:20:00 PM

Speaking of barriers, there is something that we see as atmosphere here.' though solid its not, some say that a lot..' but if you reckon you've seen 'Him' break through, they'll observe its a wall, its all 'too true blue'